Fly-fever: infectious sickness resulting in high fevers and death in infants or those who are physically weak.
Focals: name given to the five chief practitioners of Grafting in the Eastern Canopy.
Freehold: fortified villages, remnants of independent states in the Eastern Canopy. The Freeholds have peace treaties with the Priest’s Council, however this does not stop the Argosians from conducting periodic raids, or some Nurians on the Freeholds from planning rebellion.
Under the hood…
I’m interested as a general rule in complexity in secondary worlds, rather than simplicity. I want to find shades of grey in surprising places. I’d rather not just tell the story of the good guys versus the evil empire; I want to know about the guys who wind up being part of the evil empire because they think they’re doing good, and the good guys who commit evil actions as a result of stubbornness, personal suffering or sheer bad luck. Even the Argosians were not always as they are now: their civilisation passed through a period of growth and flowering just like that of the Nurians. They only gradually became intolerant and power-hungry.
If someone were to say, “so, in your story the Nurians are the good guys, right? Focals and Freeholds vs the imperial power of Argos?” I’d have to disagree. On the surface of it, the Nurians are the underdogs here. They’re the slaves who rebel, the victims of repression. But a thousand years ago, they had the most powerful empire in the Tree. And they didn’t behave much better than the Argosians.
I’ve tried to create over the course of these three books a sense of a complex world containing no easy solutions. Whether I’ve succeeded or not is for readers to decide, but I did enjoy the process!